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Brandongould1994
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2019-08-26 02:30

Hi this is Brandon gould I just read the first three chapters of your book and I am also a up and coming writer I will give your book a review if you go over and look at my book Demonsong and give it a review Of the chapters I read the story seems to be moving at a good speed, you should try to make more paragraphs so it is a bit more readable and if someone is supposed to be talking either to themselves or other people you put "" so that symbolizes that they are talking I did like it seems very interesting and unique

The Chronicles of New Havens

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DivineFifteen
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Hello, readers! Please review my work if you have the chance. Although this is my first novel, I have been working on this series for a long time. There hasn't been many chances for feedback. Thank you for supporting my work!

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Warbeast262
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A great story so far I am amazed at how people haven't found about this yet. Someone needs to spam reviews on it. Great work author keep up the good work and support will be there.

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DivineFifteen
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Hello, readers! Author here. Please take the time to review my work if you haven't had the chance to. It isn't easy to produce content from such a sophisticated world that flows naturally. Obviously, it is compounded by the fact I am in my final year of university. Any tips/comments/suggestions to improve and I would be grateful. Cheers!

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Random_Asian
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Sup I'm voting out of good will, as an author who has a novel that's pretty much at the bottom rank its nice to see one that's basically made for free instead of locked chapters but it's fine to lock chapters if writing is basically ur job lol. I really wish the best for us not well known authors lmao

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SilentMild
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May more readers find this gem! This is my initial review to show my support for you until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end! I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!

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Brandongould1994
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Hi divine fifteen this is Brandon gould the Writer of Demonsong I am glad to see that my votes have put you so high up I hope to see you at the top at some point

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