This is honestly not a bad Fanfic, well it's not great either because is some things like the way the author writes for example, it doesn't have many grammatical errors... it's just weird. The second thing is the paragraphs, like author-san you don't make a paragraph with more than 10 lines ok, just 8 is enough.
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