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lillyone
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I liked the story plot a LOT but the writing technique frustrated me a little do to it going really well getting to a peak of the moment and then stop do to unnecessary filler content like writing out an entire song instead of the main lyrics to get the point across. And although I REALLY enjoyed getting other characters points of vew I feel like it could have been done in a different way to not make it drag on for so long. But the peak into other characters was a very nice touch to the story ...... just a little frustrating when you go back to one scene 3 to 4 times. But all in all I still I enjoyed the book. Thank you.

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The cold hearten vampire and the slave

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sweetally
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yes same here