Review Detail of xWangan in Descent

I think the novel is pretty interesting. I’d say it feels a little bit cliché for me, but it’s not too bad, as characters are distinct enough. As of now the story is pretty short, so it’s hard for me to imagine where you will go with the plot premise. The stability of updates is great, with chapters every day being released as of now. The biggest problem I’ve got with this novel, is the way it’s written. While the names are weird for me, but that’s something that I can ignore. The issue is, that you’ve got lots of infodumps and weird formatting. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not like there’s anything wrong with having infodumps by itself, but at the very least they could be split up into different paragraphs. The way it is now, when a lot of time the text is just like one, solid block going on and on, it’s very hard to read for me personally. The story itself has some promise to it, so good luck!