Review Detail of Siron8 in Asteroid Rising

Hey, even though I am the author, I shamelessly comment on my own story! I wrote this story based off of my own “plays” I used to enjoy as a child and that still entertain me in my audibly years. I am currently acquiring a Bachelors degree in physics, so the science presented in the story will (hopefully) conform with reality. Still, this is ultimately a fantasy, and I ask for you all to be forgiving of the many atrocious mistakes that I will probably make on my first novel.