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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv44yr
2020-01-04 10:22

Crap novel. Firstly it is hard to read it. I have to pretty much fix every sentence in my mind for the story to make sense. Secondly, there are lots of stupid things happening in the story, for example mc sees some girl and falls in love with her straight away even though she is just nobody. Also, she is raped so mc marries some nobody abused rape victim?? Yeah very fun for us readers. I don't read stories for such sh*t!

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Tarou
TarouLv4

Actually true - this **** is so unreadable. I’m having an aneurysm trying to rearrange the words

Muspon
MusponLv13

it may be true but reading your review is nearly at the same level of grammatical errors

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

You have no eyes if you think my short comment is comparable to this web novel.

Muspon:it may be true but reading your review is nearly at the same level of grammatical errors
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