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Review Detail of Vrinda13 in Nova Roma

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I really like the concept behind this book which is different from other books. The only complaint I had while reading this book was lagging grammer and sentence formation. Many times it was hard for me to understand the meaning behind the sentences. You have also done silly grammatical mistakes like you haven't used full stop (.) in the end of sentences. At some places you have used I instead of he, His instead of her. Please focus on such mistakes. Your book has potential but no reader will stick to your book for longer if he keeps finding such mistakes again and again.

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