Review Detail of devt2 in Beginning of extra ordinary life

Hello, I am the author of this novel which is you are reading, I am student and English is not my first language so there may be some grammatical error in this number so please consider it is a news writer and read it I think the story is very good and I'm trying to update 1 chapter a day, because creating a chapter takes time writing also take time.I am not so shameless that I give my free fire profile because I know there is a very much pure and vertical problem in the story so I give only 3.8 please give your review and give me any solution I can consider it.