Review Detail of Katie_Turner in The Great Sea Prince

This is a self review. I really do see potential in myself but I honestly am disappointed at how my first chapters came out on this story. I promise to do better. And the spoiler is not for this book, but for the future. When I am done writing this I am currently working on another book that will be turned into a series. It is gonna be a fantasy. Any settings, religions, and characters are all my own. If there are similarities between mine and someone else's you heard of they are completely coincidental. Thank you.