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SunScar9
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This is the kind of story I usually go for. So I was quite pleased and read through the story at a rapid pace. Of course, I am here to give constructive criticism and tell you all the good things about the plot. Stability of Updates: I trust in the author and know that sometimes things happen. For now, she has been consistent and I don't think that will change any time soon. And I know to wait for a good story. This will definitely be one I will be reading. Story Development: The story is paced neither too fast nor too slow. This makes it easy for the readers to breeze through the story without feeling strained and bored about what is to happen next. World Background: I would like for more information on the world, but I realize that the story is too new to make judgments on right now. So I will keep reading and give my thoughts on it on a later date. Character Development: I don't quite enjoy the characters, to be honest, but that is my personal opinion. I have a serious problem with the male lead's attitude and the college setting is not something I expected in a strongly supernatural novel, but I will give the author the benefit of doubt. I really think that the characters need to mature more as the chapters go or I won't be able to enjoy the story. Writing Quality: The quality is good. Even though I found some sentences to be complicated and not precise, I think the writer has a lot of potential and will improve in no time. There needs to be slight changes in the mode of narration, but I enjoy the consistency of thought of the characters. Sometimes, though, they seem a bit repetitive. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

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Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha

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MishaK
MishaKAuthorMishaK

Thanks Sunscar:) Will try to improve on these points!

Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5Candiewacutie

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5Candiewacutie

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

Candiewacutie
CandiewacutieLv5Candiewacutie

Its alwys good to say out wat u think.the good n d bad..if thea is smthn thy can do well n good.it can b chngd

Ashpenn31
Ashpenn31Lv10Ashpenn31

I definitely agree. The story is told at the right pace.

Sunny_Sol
Sunny_SolLv3Sunny_Sol

I like the creative criticism. I feel it helps the author and the story overall

Sunny_Sol
Sunny_SolLv3Sunny_Sol

Yay!

MishaK:Thanks Sunscar:) Will try to improve on these points!
resendizshattuck
resendizshattuckLv15resendizshattuck

Same with the writing. Took the words out my mouth. But also when rapid reading I had to go back a few times to recheck. Lol

Free_Spirited_Nerd
Free_Spirited_NerdLv2Free_Spirited_Nerd

Completely agree! This story is so amazing