Overall, the story has a lot of potential. However, there are a few areas where the story is lacking. For example, there are a few grammatical errors here and there and the sentence structures left a bit to be desired. Still, that doesn't take away from the pleasure of reading the story. Anyway, the author can reread their work and make the necessary changes as time goes by, so it's not that important. The ML is dotting towards the FL to a very large degree and the FL is the cliché damsel in distress being saved by her knight in shining armour. The story is the usual run of the mill romance but the author has added their own flavour into it which makes it a good option for a relaxed, binge-reading. All the best, Author. Hope you can reach your target of top 100 and bring the story to a wider audience 🙂❤
TheLazyRabbit
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LIKENa, don't put the novel on hiatus Many of us authors do it this way - when you have reached a specific number of chapters or have a stockpile of the next few ones, go back and reread the earlier chapters - a chapter or two daily and then make the necessary changes. This way you can continue posting the new chapters and edit your earlier ones at a sedate pace 🙂🤗
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