Okay, this is an overall really good novel, one I'd recommend. But, there are some issues that make it...disconnect with the original. Though this is a Fanfiction, it makes it feel like a self-fulfillment. Random abilities without proper explanation, a name that doesn't suit, lacking information, etc. 3 stars logically - 4.1 stars passionately. Good work
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