Review Detail of CCmei in I was Born the Unloved Twin
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I'm the 10th review and yes this is a shameless rating. In reality, I'm shy and this sort of self-promo hurts me to do. So this you clicked on this story and want to know more what it's about? What is it? Should I even bother reading? Normally you start out a date or advertisement with all the best things. so I'll do the opposite and list out the worst that I've heard. This is a boring story, very tedious, mundane and downright just boring. It's too slow, the characters are too confusing & make possibly retarded choices. And I won't refute that. If you're still reading then here's my take It's a silly, self-indulgent, not very original, and deceptively shallow thing. It's the kind of oddly specific thing I wanted to read but couldn't find, so I clumsily made it myself. It is a work of love but it will not appeal to most readers on here. I know that much. It's a reborn/isekai type novel with no OP Cheat powers, scheming, face slapping, harem gathering, overbearing romance, prince charmings, or even a clear cut villian. There are no major time ski**, no "get to the most interesting action already", and sometimes no clear point. I'm not fishing for compliments or actively trying to scare anyone away. If this type of story is not what you're looking for that's okay. I don't want you to read something you don't like. Still there? If you're still interested you will follow and grow up with the MC reborn in her infantile body. Growing up is slow and nothing is as simple as it seems, but it can be if you want it to. If a modern person with no aspiration outside a peaceful life was suddenly reborn with all her memories into this hopeless villainess role, what do you think she would do? What shenanigans would she get up to, how would she make the best of it, and what would she discover about those around her? What would you, the reader see, that she doesn't? If you're still reading, still curious then I welcome you to give it a try. You can tell me if it makes you happy, or if it makes you want to cry. If you feel angry, peaceful, soft or all sorts of things in between. Because that's just life for a lot of us. So buckle up for the long ride in the second life of one Rosalia Therese Ventrella.
I was Born the Unloved Twin
CCmei
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SO I just want you to know I've probably reread this reply and comment a couple of dozen times. Thank you for it, it's really encouraging. And thank you for being my first review all those months ago, it means more than you know.
KoraL:I'm sorry, but I hate this review. You put yourself down so much, when you've really developed a wonderful little gem here. Have more confidence and keep up the good work! Please don't get discouraged by the negative Nancy's. Sincerely, your quiet and sporadic but loyal fan.
I'm glad you found my comment encouraging. It's always depressing when a creator gets demotivated and stops before their work gets completed. Thank you for writing, and I hope to be able to follow this story to its completion.
CCmei:SO I just want you to know I've probably reread this reply and comment a couple of dozen times. Thank you for it, it's really encouraging. And thank you for being my first review all those months ago, it means more than you know.
It’s very slow-paced but I never felt that this novel is mundane. Everything in the story is just soo well written that I can see colours, I can smell and taste the flavours and I feel every little bit of emotions. I see what she see, in other words I feel like I am inside the story and I AM THE CHARACTER.
I was about to quit webnovel. All trashy ceo and damsel in distress stories. I know there should be more than that. I guess i have bad luck. But i found this and you are an amazing writer. Take your time, with this quality i don't mind the slow pace or the no-skip on time decision. I think that skip on time is what make the other female lead look superficial. With your style we know how she grows and how everyone around her is changing. I will not like to skip in time 10 years to discover "i avoid my parent death and they are not as bad as i remember, they dont love me i haven't fix my issues also lily is still cute" Please keep going and let me know if you find something worthy in here. I will 100% trust your opinion base on the way you write and the not so subtle pop-culture references.
Dude, read her other work, Queen of the Castaway Isle. Quite different from Unloved Twin but so so good. ❤️
Lya_Lee:I was about to quit webnovel. All trashy ceo and damsel in distress stories. I know there should be more than that. I guess i have bad luck. But i found this and you are an amazing writer. Take your time, with this quality i don't mind the slow pace or the no-skip on time decision. I think that skip on time is what make the other female lead look superficial. With your style we know how she grows and how everyone around her is changing. I will not like to skip in time 10 years to discover "i avoid my parent death and they are not as bad as i remember, they dont love me i haven't fix my issues also lily is still cute" Please keep going and let me know if you find something worthy in here. I will 100% trust your opinion base on the way you write and the not so subtle pop-culture references.
renzsantiago:Dude, read her other work, Queen of the Castaway Isle. Quite different from Unloved Twin but so so good. ❤️
you know, no offense here, that GIF gives no credibility to the words you want to say, honestly. But the meaning is conveyed, don't worry.
High_Sky:great work , keep goingimage
what is wrong with the gif ? i did not choose any thing offensive . i appreciate the that the ccemi is giving great chapter . what is wrong with that ?
MSM:you know, no offense here, that GIF gives no credibility to the words you want to say, honestly. But the meaning is conveyed, don't worry.
I'm sorry. I did not mean to offend you as I could be also mistaken about it, but the person in the GIF is similar to an comedian actor, so that's why I said that.
High_Sky:what is wrong with the gif ? i did not choose any thing offensive . i appreciate the that the ccemi is giving great chapter . what is wrong with that ?
and I did not mean you did not appreciate the story, I was saying it in a way more of a joke. I'm sorry once again, sometimes these types of commentaries are not very good, I shall refect in it and not do it again anymore.
High_Sky:what is wrong with the gif ? i did not choose any thing offensive . i appreciate the that the ccemi is giving great chapter . what is wrong with that ?
MSM:and I did not mean you did not appreciate the story, I was saying it in a way more of a joke. I'm sorry once again, sometimes these types of commentaries are not very good, I shall refect in it and not do it again anymore.