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GrimTheCat
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2020-07-20 11:51

The character development and soft world building is great. This has a slow moving plot and is mostly a slice of life. There are fluffy wholesome chapters and dark action packed chapters. The characters are rich and mostly multidimensional, with strengths and faults, no Mary Sue's here. The problems that the characters face aren't always just about good versus evil, but the daily struggles of life. The main character is battling memories, which both help and harm her. Can she learn to trust the people around her? Can she gain confidence in her reality? Can she succeed in not only surviving but also in thriving? We shall hopefully see. This story is an unpolished gem, that could benefit from an editor clarifying scenes and catching grammatical error. However if you are like me, use to reading novels online, then you'll be able to see the shine of this novel regardless if the author spells a word wrong, or confuses you when a scene or POV changes. I recommend this story!

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Possibly one of the best among it's genre. Heck, I think it's one of the best novel you can find in this platform. The characters' designs and developments are awesome. After reaching some point(chapter), you can see many, many things have a reason as to why she is like this, why things are like that. And it is safe to assume that the author have the story(future) planned just as impressive. The author's first person pov writing style though, if you stop reading for a moment and try to appreciate the sentences, paragraphs, the writing, it is dam.n awesome. I'd say it's rare to see such refined quality as satisfying as this one in this platform. The more you read, the more it's astonish you. And before you realized, you already finished the (very long) chapter. The story albeit slow, It's very enjoyable, and impactful. Thanks to the author's impressive writing style and quality, you can't help but immersed to the story, feel the characters, love the characters. If there's any cons, it's just that I have a problem accepting their age. It annoys me at first. But after reading through it all, such small dent (imho) isn't even worth mentioning. It's got outweighed a lot by much more good stuffs. Other than that everything else is perfect. All in all, it's a satisfying read, a true hidden gem, an amazing roller coaster of emotions that I'd never expect from a slice of life genre. Thanks to the author for bringing us this great novel.👍 Wholely recommended. Note for author, if u ever feel down (esp because of reading other novels of the same genre, because i think it's a bit absurd given ur novel is already this awesome), just remember that we (the fans) are here to support u. We love UT the way it already is. So pls, keep up the gud work! Btw, I'm still at ch. 111 Will be waiting for more! Last but not least, I'd like to state that I've read and usually prefer novels like TCF, Novel's Extra, Tale of a lax demon, Nanomancer Reborn, Shini Yasui Koushaku, and the likes. Those r some of my best read (Doesn't mean I never read any other genre). And now (after lots of browsing and surfing through the sea of webnovel), I'd like to add this one to my list of (my)best read. I also have read a good number of reincarnation/transmigration and fantasy webtoons. Esp shoujo ones. Tho not much of those sticks with me.

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