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I just love the story. The novel translation is ok. But could you please add more space to the paragraph so it look neat and clean :). Btw the story for this early chapters looks fine to me. The background of the world is good but the early reincarnation makes me confused a little . . But that's fine. Finally idk what to write coz it's need 140 characters so last words thx for make walking dead FF love it!