Good luck buddy for writting. Quite good, too OP but nahhh i'm fine with it. Just stabilize your story to make it more like a good novel not like those half ass written fanfic. Try to read some fanfic from fanfiction.net or spacebattles forum, you'll get some inspirations, i hope.
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