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Review Detail of OOFLEZ in Jojo's Bizarre Adventure system 《Cultivation World》

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Alright alright alright, an actually good and detailed review. Firstly, the grammar is horrible as there as so many mistakes in this that it's literally a pain to even read. " Shut up you old debris. " Was one of the bad ones. Updates? THIS WAS DROPPED A DAMN YEAR AGOOO. Character design? The MC ATTEMPTS TO ACT ALL BOLD AND MIGHTY LIKE DIO?!!? Seriously, Author even states that MC use to be an Otaku fatty. Background? It's already bad enough, and what's up with the names? " Mountain Ahniliation Fist " Or something whatever is a bad name -_- Also, AUTHOR CAN'T DECIDE ON WHAT STATS, at one point all of The World's stats were at B, NOW THEY'RE AT B AND SOME Ds WITH As. I dropped this book on like chapter 17? Yeah around that. Also, you made Hamon a low tier ability ALTHOUGHT YOU MAKE IT ABLE TO MAKE AN EXPLOSION FOR LIKE 100 FEET OR SOMETHING LIKE ???????????????? Seriously, all I've gotta say is that this book is utter trash and you shouldn't read it, unless you like reading terrible grammar, literal non-sense, and a MC that's constantly nerfed.

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Jojo's Bizarre Adventure system 《Cultivation World》

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Brother you gave me 1.5 stars? That's too much! That shit doesn't even deserve a star! It's my first work so I have to admit it's shit! It's so shitty that I want to hide underground for daring to write such a story. If you want to read a good work you can try Anime Survival it's quite interesting and I've made a huge improvement in grammar.