Review Detail of Doog in Son of the Spirit Beast
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So far, I have greatly been enjoying this novel. The characters aren't your typical "smart" mc's that do the dumbest crap possible. Instead, they actually plan ahead and consider what they're doing. Any mistakes they make are usually because they are still immature children, or because of their limited worldview. They aren't arrogant, as they know there are likely people with more talent than them, while also not being overly humble, as they still easily destroy opponents when necessary. Their advantage in combat makes sense, since who the hell would be expecting a human to fight like a beast? My one singular gripe is that the worldbuilding seems kind of basic, and a lot of stuff that is introduced is just kind of abandoned, with no later mention. Asides from that, five stars in everything, I would absolutely recommend this to anyone trying to read a good Wuxia novel, then I'd solidly recommend this one.
Son of the Spirit Beast
NagatoSaitou
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Of course! Mostly, it's just the minor sects and kingdoms from earlier on that I feel could have been explored more. Instead of just tossing them all in for the PD and having them never show up again, they might have been interesting temporary rivals, maybe eventually allies of the MC, or perhaps he might have found some deep secret between them or the like. Granted, those are all pretty common troupes, but considering the quality of your writing so far, I'm sure you would have found a way to make it unique. Obviously, though, it's your story, and if you feel that it would have disrupted the general flow then I have no complaints and I'll probably change my review.
NagatoSaitou:Thanks for your review. Can I know what stuff that has been introduced is just kind of abandoned?
I wanted to move asap on the main part, which is the Continent. Ps: all the characters you have seen so far will return later. They have already a role in future arcs. It is also for this reason that I didn’t want to focus too much on that part
Doog:Of course! Mostly, it's just the minor sects and kingdoms from earlier on that I feel could have been explored more. Instead of just tossing them all in for the PD and having them never show up again, they might have been interesting temporary rivals, maybe eventually allies of the MC, or perhaps he might have found some deep secret between them or the like. Granted, those are all pretty common troupes, but considering the quality of your writing so far, I'm sure you would have found a way to make it unique. Obviously, though, it's your story, and if you feel that it would have disrupted the general flow then I have no complaints and I'll probably change my review.
I wanted to move asap on the main part, which is the Continent. Ps: all the characters you have seen so far will return later. They have already a role in future arcs. It is also for this reason that I didn’t want to focus too much on that part
Doog:Of course! Mostly, it's just the minor sects and kingdoms from earlier on that I feel could have been explored more. Instead of just tossing them all in for the PD and having them never show up again, they might have been interesting temporary rivals, maybe eventually allies of the MC, or perhaps he might have found some deep secret between them or the like. Granted, those are all pretty common troupes, but considering the quality of your writing so far, I'm sure you would have found a way to make it unique. Obviously, though, it's your story, and if you feel that it would have disrupted the general flow then I have no complaints and I'll probably change my review.
