Review Detail of Cvpro in Return of the demon

The story seems good.. however, i left at chapter 10 as the cultivation system seems to be in mess. Would not go deeper into it as if anybody can move past Chapter 10, then they are good to go as they are comfortable with the cult. system. However, i was not as i felt that it became more and more confusing which irritated me. Also i wish the author gets a good editor as there were many grammatical issues.