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Grasshopper_sensei
Grasshopper_senseiAuthor5yr
2019-07-16 11:17

The author here doing a shameless review of his own light novel thus far! To be honest, I love my own light novel. However, I'm very much a realist too, I don't think it's a masterpiece by any means, so a 5/5 isn't something I'd give myself. But, I love my own light novel so 3/5 is too low. Therefore, I concluded that a 4/5 would be suiting to give myself :).

The nuclear test (Rough draft)

Grasshopper_sensei
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Chaoticmike
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When will you rewrite the story?

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Grasshopper_sensei
Grasshopper_senseiAuthor

I'm sorry to disappoint but it won't be any time soon if my teachers don't give me a break with this homework.

Chaoticmike:When will you rewrite the story?
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Nonny69
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Good story, nice writing, and good plot development, without it feeling to forced. The way you start letting the story write itself helps build this as well as makes the MC more relatable, hopefully you can release more chapters soon.

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