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Okay, so I normally don't read stories with a "system" or "game" element, so I don't know what the criteria are for them, but this story intrigues me. I was expecting the first chapter to establish a bland mc who's extremely OP stepping out of the gate, but I find myself wanting to read more, and genuinely laughing. That probably says something about my sense of humor or you as a writer. Either way, I look forward to reading more. Keep going!

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How To End The Game Of A God (First Draft)

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Thanks, please point out anything that you think is a plothole or grammatical mistake. I am happy for any and all constructive criticism.