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2020-03-03 05:50

I love the story,I have been waiting for this like forever.please do continue. I read the 5 episodes and I truely enjoyed them.some suggestions I like to give,like; You can talk a bout their skins too,selena's maiden skin for her disguise... I hope in future there would be much more romance and ^3^ And.... I never thaught anyone would make this ship too,I'm just too happy.thank you so much.love your work.

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Omg! Thank you for writing a review. I never thought anyone would be able to come across this story. I originally created this to join the novel writing contest of mlbb before but stopped since there is no chance for it to be read. It warmed my heart to have read your review. I appreciate it! I'm sorry you had been waiting for it for a long time. I promise that I will finish this story for you. Thank you!

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