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GeneralDeFartos_LLv41yr
2023-09-16 06:51

Simply a masterpiece. The writing style is great. The chaotic mc and the dynamic between the characters is amazing. It got me hooked. It's just a real shame it's dropped.

My female disciples are scary

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4.7
23 Chs

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Djablok
DjablokLv11

5star because it is just that good (this went straight to my library). Great job, I hope you will continue writing for a long time.

5yr

2User1
2User1Lv5

This story is great. The plot is fantastic, and the characters are very funny. In the half a year since I started using this app, this is one of the best stories I have read. Although, after each chapter gets out, I feel like I want more ten of them after reading it, I am okay with the speed of releases as long as it isn’t dropped before reaching its end.

5yr
Akichi
AkichiLv6

As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.

5yr
RebeccaJWW
RebeccaJWWLv11

Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed. By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters. Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage. If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.

5yr
Max255
Max255Lv6

Why???? Why author?! Just why must you break my heart?! It was such a good novel. I was beginning to like it and you dropped it. Now I'm sad 😔.........

5yr
Shalan1000
Shalan1000Lv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Zulch
ZulchLv4

The story's pacing is just about right without getting you bored if you binge it but i wish there was more detail put into world building since i sometimes get lost when a random concept or POV is on but over all a good read for so little chapters out

5yr
isma_il
isma_ilLv5

This is a good read especially if you came for a laugh when cultivation and op mc is what you are looking for. I want to thank the author for sharing this good read with us readers and I hope he just continues making new chapters cause the story's concept is great. ;)

5yr
Brise_Blutgott
Brise_BlutgottLv1

Honestly one of the best books I’ve read on this platform. Though it’s a shame it had to be dropped I commend the author for their efforts.

4yr
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