There's just something about the way the author has written this that causes it to be wonderfully immersive. Even from the very start, in the auxiliary chapter, the world building is already fantastic. Though there are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, nothing too big that detracts too much from the enjoyment of the read. The thing that really draws readers in is the fantastic way the author draws you into the world that the characters are in. The characters are believable and seem well written as of chapter 10. The plot is progressing at a steady pace, drawing the reader in. Keep up the good work, author! Hoping to read more soon. :)
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