A very involving story with lots of detail. The author does an excellent job of making you feel that everything happens for a reason, and rarely skips over anything of import. My favourite element is how the author conveys information in a very natural way, and I don't feel like I'm just reading walls of text. I haven't read much modern warfare styled web novels, but if this is anything to go by, then I will start reading more. I very much recommend giving this story a read.

I love this story. It feels like being inside a real action movie. Even though author's vocabulary is apparently limited, still you can easily visualize what's happening. To be honest, there can be found a fair amount of grammatical and punctuational problems, which I think is fine because the author is ESL. If you ignore these problems, I think you can get entertained reading this. Anyways it's better than most of the warfare novels in WN. So highly recommend it!

The settings and the names of the places are very familiar. This is good. That means many can relate to the story.There were minimal grammatical errors, but don't worry, the story is understandable...Keep it up!

Author is not milking for chapters, not one bit. Though he is providing you, the reader with a lot of explanations in the first few chapters where there are ten things going on at the same time. Otherwise, the story is enjoyable, one just needs to use a lot of imagination and everything will work out fine.

Your story is good, though. You have so many informations and details but because you can visualize the story so good, I don't feel like I'm reading a documentary. All in all, It's good! Keep up the good work!

It was a nice story with a bit of writing instability. It can be fixed and learned, it was still understandable even though. But I hope the author support me as well with my first novel. Sending reviews to each and every one.

The story is really interesting but there are some mistakes in writing quality that might bother some people. Besides that quite a bit of important knowledge is in a info dump in the authors notes at the end of chapter one.

First of all the writing quality is good so we don't need to rack our own brains to understand the phrases and can enjoy the story. This point is enough to read it. After that the plot is also kind of unique giving an extra point to the story. I hope I enjoy reading it further in the future... All the best

This is definitely a good story. Its worth it to read it and I believe that the story has alot of potential as long as the writing part of this can be solved which the author seems to be doing in the later chapters

So here's my take on the story: It's actually pretty decent. I'm not saying it's perfect, but it's one of those that really stood out to me more than the typical stuff you see in this platform. At the start of the chapter, I admit, I wasn't too immersed when I first came in (with some poor sentences here and there) -but holy hell did the later parts did. The events unfolding, the battles at each front, the ambushes -it felt like the author really knows what he was doing, like he has this mini-map within his brain telling him of all the positions both sides were in. For me, it's not the "next big thing," but it doesn't have to be. The story is good and solid. The characters, such as Jose and the many soldiers, really feel real. I can also tell of you're enthusiasm in writing this story. I mean, not many writers opt for a war simulation kind of novel, and it's not really that popular, but you wrote it anyways. I tip my hat to you, Mr. Author, for crafting a solid story.