A Trancender's Guide to Another World, or ATG I shall name it for short, certainly has its charms. I particularly like how the main character, Mike, is surprisingly relatable. He emits a down-to-earth vibe that I find comforting to read, especially in an isekai (other world) setting. His wit and quirky remarks make for a few good laughs. The author's writing style is mainly casual as befitting for a webnovel and the chosen POV, but also adaptable enough to write in a more novel-ish style with more sophisticated words to depict precise settings. Regarding the story development, I find it a little too fast-paced in a chapter or two (maybe I'm just too sentimental and want more details). Yet I do enjoy how there aren't any "beating around the bush" in this story. And with the pace it's going so far, I think it's worth following for now. But we'll see if its quality eventually degrades due to deadlines. Now, regarding details, I'd prefer if the author describes the characters' appearance and mannerisms more because I'd like to have a clearer image of the characters without having to make too much assumptions. In addition to that, embellishing backgrounds (place, situation, etc.) more would be nice. Ah, yes, and I also appreciate how the author is careful to not give out an info dump onto us. Well, no one is perfect, and ATG does suffer from a few grammatical errors in every chapter or so. Due to that, I advise the author to triple check the chapter before publishing. TL;DR: So far, so good. Keep reading, it gets better.
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Hello, there. I'm glad your enjoyed the first few chapters of my work, as ****ty as it is right now (I promise return to fix that up eventually). Also, thanks for being generous enough to point out my flaws, I will take your advice to heart and improve upon my future chapters.
Sorry to hear of Chewbacca's death, best wishes for your family.
A splendid review!
