Review Detail of Rhod_Icyfreeze in Dawn Of The Dark Age

Most of the chapters are short so it is easy to read and finish the entire chapter. It is so good for readers who don't want long blocks of text. Some part of the story is written in fast-paced while some part is well written in details and there's some written in huge elaboration making the scene(s) and chapters quite long for a simple scene. I like the way you're making the story simple and relatable to the game. Merging characters with a different timeline based on their designs and back stories are really hard. From a simple story that turns to complicated flow. I think you have to at least provide the plot to know where your story will lead and ends. =)