Review Detail of chounevere in Violet Requiem

I must say— even though parang mas matanda ka pa sakin, kasi 12 pa lang ako haha —it's not 'too detailed', like everybody was saying, it's just redundant. You don't need to describe a person they way you have already described them in the previous sentence or paragraph. I've only read chapter 1 and already found it out. I'm not saying it's bad, considering that I'm very kind girl, you just need to know how to construct a detailed yet not redundant story. Also, the use of punctuations must be high. Well, If you would want that, because that actually makes your story look like a real novel. I'm sorry, I can't really support your story. But if you can, please read and vote for mine; a story almost identical to yours– "The Violet Quest". I hope you find this really helpful, despite how the others had let you down. I'm apparently jealous of how you got so many support. But, of course, this competition isn't fair for the stories from the second page up to the last page. People kept focusing on the highest rankings, which makes me really angry at people.