I wouldn't say much about the things you might have overlooked cause I'm sure you already know it by now. I just want to say that i admire your attitude towards criticisms and that will definitely lead you to places further than where you are now. Keep on writing! You'll learn more and more on the process. I know you're a good writer. You're still young and you surely have the potential to be the best of who you are. Grab all the opportunities to learn. I know one day you'd be one of the best. 😊👍
HeavenlyCatKing
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LIKEHeavenlyCatKing:Thank you for the encouragement and I will definitely grab all the opportunities to learn. Thank you again 😊😊