Review Detail of Chachachacha in Violet Requiem
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I think you should focus on building atmosphere and proper writing. It isn't really too bad, you just need to place your wordings correctly and add more depth into it, you know? To make things interesting.
Violet Requiem
HeavenlyCatKing
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That’s what my experienced friends told me, but Im just new to this and what you had just read were the new chapters I posted. And it has a little improvement than before. That’s all, and I really try to improve every single time so yea haha I will do what you have asked but as I myself is still lacking on focusing on it, I will now try and improve on that aspect. And thank you for pointing out to what I still have to focus on as I myself still don’t know that it’s still lacking.
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