Hm, so I'm rating my own novel apparently, well every chapter has more than 1600 words, some even in the 2000s, I edit it a lot just to make sure the grammar is fine and that there are no mistakes, but if there are mistakes, then I apologize, but as they say, no one's perfect. My novel.....well story I suppose you could say, isn't really hero like, not interested in that, to be honest, sometimes I don't understand how that childish mentality works, like are you that lonely? Well anyways if anyone has read this comment and you're into heroes, then I suggest you click that back button because even heroes fall to darkness, it's inevitable.
Why_See_No_Evil
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LIKEYou're asking if it's a harem correct? Well my Mc is evil so he doesn't love for now I suppose, but if you're asking if he has a lot of women, well let's just say he doesn't sleep with just one or two. It's more on the lines of a messed up manipulation kinda thing.
yourname128:Is harem?
For every 5 chapters I post, I will take a two-day break, the 5 chapters are always posted on Monday - Friday. You can see this on the author thoughts on chapter 5 and 10. It's basically at the end of the chapter, before comments.
DivineOverseer:Do you post chapters every?
Why_See_No_Evil:For every 5 chapters I post, I will take a two-day break, the 5 chapters are always posted on Monday - Friday. You can see this on the author thoughts on chapter 5 and 10. It's basically at the end of the chapter, before comments.
Why_See_No_Evil:You're asking if it's a harem correct? Well my Mc is evil so he doesn't love for now I suppose, but if you're asking if he has a lot of women, well let's just say he doesn't sleep with just one or two. It's more on the lines of a messed up manipulation kinda thing.
Love huh, that's maybe a long time from now too maybe never, he's a manipulator and I'm not sure yet if I'm gonna have love here or if I'm not gonna have that in general.
yourname128:Wow nice haha. When the mc knows that it is love he will make his harem? :D
LlMlTLESS:Made a new review but i'm not making another one, my opinion stands.
You have too much going on, as is. Teen wolf side is enough for now, don't try to put him in Supernatural yet. Separate the two into volumes, when he gets bored of Teen wolf or is done with what he is doing, then switch to the other world. If you don't, readers may get confused with what is going on. Don't over crowd the chapters with events, that just ruins the story. However, if you find it difficult to not put it in, just keep interactions to a minimum and gradually lean into the other world. Take this with a grain of salt.
Nah mam, I need to watch my salt intake level's and supernatural is a while from now and when I end **** wolf and enter supernatural, I may have a grand finally with the **** wolfs side, but I'm taking my time and putting in come content and context to the story. Thx for the info, Cheers mate.
randomsomething:You have too much going on, as is. Teen wolf side is enough for now, don't try to put him in Supernatural yet. Separate the two into volumes, when he gets bored of Teen wolf or is done with what he is doing, then switch to the other world. If you don't, readers may get confused with what is going on. Don't over crowd the chapters with events, that just ruins the story. However, if you find it difficult to not put it in, just keep interactions to a minimum and gradually lean into the other world. Take this with a grain of salt.