Review Detail of DaoistsjFqtf in BTS - A NEW DIMENSION

I've read a lot of BTS stories, and after reading a few chapters, I feel like it sucks. Normal female lead design, normal setting and importantly BTS OOC too much. The style of writing is like a newbie writing a pen :)) (Sorry, my English is pretty bad, so I'll just stop commenting here. If there are mistakes, please forgive me)