Item: Lust Incarnate
Rating: 1

GGMissFortuneLv65yr

2019-05-23 01:04

meh meh meh extremely bad grammar meh meh meh bringing in characters from different anime into an original world meh meh meh use your own original characters meh meh meh

Lust Incarnate

Broughtwaorld

4.2

29 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies3

BroughtwaorldAuthor

if you found bad grammar, you can point them out in comments and I will fix them.

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Daoist_IntrovertLv15

Dude... it’s a fucking fan-fic... the whole point about a fan fic is that he uses **** that he is fan of and uses it for his own story...

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champakesLv10

Yea I agree. It kinda threw me off for a moment, didn't think i was going to read a fan fic.

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