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Ispywithmyeye
IspywithmyeyeLv25yr
2019-05-17 01:18

Pacing is too slow at the moment. Nothing really excites me even when I am a few chapters in. And the way u navigate the story is not fluid. Grammer and vocab wise is also quite bad. Ur phrasing of words need a lot of development and use thesauraus to help improve ur vocab. Once this story gets better, I will remove this review and give u a new 1.

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Sekz318
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Thanks for your sincere opinion, it helps me to notice my mistakes

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