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EijiSeishuu
EijiSeishuuLv115yr
2019-05-15 21:31

shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................

In Danmachi With a System

SleepyAzami
4.3
10 Chs

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ThyIllusiveFossil
ThyIllusiveFossilLv13

Liked the story, author said they were redoing it. Based on the fact that most authors would never follow up from my experience, that remains to be seen. Still it was good and I hope the rewrite will be better.

5yr

metruyen
metruyenLv4

cho hỏi có bản cập nhập mới chưa vậy? Nếu có thì xin cho tôi xin cái link với để tôi đọc và ủng hộ. Truyện này rất hay cảm ơn tác giả đã viết truyện này.

5yr
BURNING
BURNINGLv5

5 stars because I'm generous. ==============================================================================================================

5yr
Michael_Robison_0719
Michael_Robison_0719Lv4

please update the book when you have the time or chance

5mth
Kyrus
KyrusLv15

Reviewing a year after it gotndropped because it still comes up in my mind sometimes. Tons of potential and it was delivering it hand over fist in just a few short chapters. I wish it would get picked back up or a similar one would be made.

4yr
Sleepydragon_
Sleepydragon_Lv15

Basically the whole story gets dropped before there is enough to give a proper review therefore it is not worth anymore than 2.5🌟 ..... ... ..............

5yr
hajakanas1
hajakanas1Lv14

so far so good. stable updates. keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................................................

5yr
PKlizbeth
PKlizbethLv10

Quick review. System pretty bare at the start and MC could use a bit more fleshing out. Good start, the fact that she is Freyas demigod is a bit OP but most SI are.... Overall just work on building the MCs background/character as you go on, try not to give her too many freebie skills and have her earn more the hard way (dungeon crawling). Good luck!

5yr
IamSpecial
IamSpecialLv2

Nth special. Just a generic fanfic of danmachi with another system u can find in so many other fan fics here. Chapters are too short as well and there are so few chapters in. Dosent even seem interesting from the start. Grammer errors here and there and paragraphing needs work

5yr
AyyLMaoZedong
AyyLMaoZedongLv5

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5yr
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