Pretty good start, I'm not in the fandom much so I can't give input there. Fun concept, but maybe a change in how the story itself is written? It might just be me, but I'm not a huge fan of: [V: yadda yadda] I'd prefer more of a: ["Yadda yadda," said V] But that's probably just me!
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