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crywolfseven
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You’re off to a pretty good start just really hope you don’t end up doing the whole harem route as that will always ruin a good story. Anyways thank you for your story and keep up the great work!

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DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

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CliffkunLolRekt
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You peaple who automatically say hope you don’t go the harem rout are the bane of my existence Yo author pls go the harem rout harem is love harem is life

crywolfseven
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Dude seriously it’s only common sense, if an author has to constantly take breaks from the main story to introduce new love interests and deepen their bond it will take away from the story. I will be honest i don’t like them for the most part, it’s normally weak storylines about a uninteresting MC that all the random girls fall in love with for almost no reason. You can read those kinds of shallow stories anywhere just search harem or something, why try and ruin a story with potential?

CliffkunLolRekt:You peaple who automatically say hope you don’t go the harem rout are the bane of my existence Yo author pls go the harem rout harem is love harem is life
crywolfseven
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I mean honestly what is there to like about a harem story? The only two things I can think of is for a dude that wants to pretend they are the MC who is having tons of girls throw themselves at him... which is rather depressing or two some dude looking to rub one out, in which case there are tons of sites for that. I’m honestly not trying to be insulting I truly don’t understand all the people clamoring to turn every potentially good story into another run of the mill harem story. I would honestly like to know why you would want that, what is it you enjoy about harem story’s?

CliffkunLolRekt:You peaple who automatically say hope you don’t go the harem rout are the bane of my existence Yo author pls go the harem rout harem is love harem is life
CliffkunLolRekt
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Nope that is only when a mc has like seven girls If the mc has like three and he meets them douse a few date chaps romance chaps the rest training and fighting ect and keeps it at a decent pace it won’t be like you discribe and heck if at like chap 70 he has some ero chaps I won’t mind and the way you discribe is like you’ve never seen a harem done right and that is why you are saying what you are I love all harem novels good or bad but the ones that really hit hard are the ones done right even the ones that are not good have there own spark to it. I will say once you find one that is done perfectly it sparks some thing that won’t stop its like you found a thousand dollor diamond in gravel every time your near gravel you won’t be able to stop wanting to search though the gravel lol The best way to discribe a harem done right is it truly hits your feels and makes you warm and fuzzy Also very very jelly of the mc

crywolfseven:Dude seriously it’s only common sense, if an author has to constantly take breaks from the main story to introduce new love interests and deepen their bond it will take away from the story. I will be honest i don’t like them for the most part, it’s normally weak storylines about a uninteresting MC that all the random girls fall in love with for almost no reason. You can read those kinds of shallow stories anywhere just search harem or something, why try and ruin a story with potential?
crywolfseven
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Fair enough, still not my cup of tea but fair enough.

CliffkunLolRekt:Nope that is only when a mc has like seven girls If the mc has like three and he meets them douse a few date chaps romance chaps the rest training and fighting ect and keeps it at a decent pace it won’t be like you discribe and heck if at like chap 70 he has some ero chaps I won’t mind and the way you discribe is like you’ve never seen a harem done right and that is why you are saying what you are I love all harem novels good or bad but the ones that really hit hard are the ones done right even the ones that are not good have there own spark to it. I will say once you find one that is done perfectly it sparks some thing that won’t stop its like you found a thousand dollor diamond in gravel every time your near gravel you won’t be able to stop wanting to search though the gravel lol The best way to discribe a harem done right is it truly hits your feels and makes you warm and fuzzy Also very very jelly of the mc
CliffkunLolRekt
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Also for the rub one out thing That’s also kinda frustrating for you to mention I prefer reading it lol all hentai is **** these days the only good ones were when hentai haven was still going and alive and not afk lol I’m not watching real **** as 99 percent of girls on those websites have roast beef pussy or purple pussy or a baluga whale and I don’t find eather of those attractive With reading ero stuff one can use there brain wich they have trained to imagin stuff like anything To imagin hentai ect and there are not many good **** book websites fanfic wise I have looked and they are hard af to find and if you do they are fucking confusing to use and there is a huge chance you won’t be able to find a non youi book much less the tag you wanted so to be fair I can understand the second part lol So pls try to understand that side too lol even tho I do love harem novels so much I try to understand harem hater sides to lol I can understand everyone has different tastes the only time I don’t really try at all is when I’m delerous at 4 am as i have problems sleeping Honestly a lot of fighting between the harem and harem haters would be resolved if authors would stop bieng indicisive and wrote in the synopsis harem or non harem I’ll give a 0 star and scream In the comments if I suddenly relise what I’ve been reading turned into a yowi ya know same with non harem or harem So let’s say 40 percent of the time the authors are at fault lol

crywolfseven:Fair enough, still not my cup of tea but fair enough.
InsertUserNameHere
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I will only say that, you use “ LoL “ to much.

CliffkunLolRekt:Also for the rub one out thing That’s also kinda frustrating for you to mention I prefer reading it lol all hentai is **** these days the only good ones were when hentai haven was still going and alive and not afk lol I’m not watching real **** as 99 percent of girls on those websites have roast beef pussy or purple pussy or a baluga whale and I don’t find eather of those attractive With reading ero stuff one can use there brain wich they have trained to imagin stuff like anything To imagin hentai ect and there are not many good **** book websites fanfic wise I have looked and they are hard af to find and if you do they are fucking confusing to use and there is a huge chance you won’t be able to find a non youi book much less the tag you wanted so to be fair I can understand the second part lol So pls try to understand that side too lol even tho I do love harem novels so much I try to understand harem hater sides to lol I can understand everyone has different tastes the only time I don’t really try at all is when I’m delerous at 4 am as i have problems sleeping Honestly a lot of fighting between the harem and harem haters would be resolved if authors would stop bieng indicisive and wrote in the synopsis harem or non harem I’ll give a 0 star and scream In the comments if I suddenly relise what I’ve been reading turned into a yowi ya know same with non harem or harem So let’s say 40 percent of the time the authors are at fault lol
CliffkunLolRekt
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Lol

InsertUserNameHere:I will only say that, you use “ LoL “ to much.
Rutuja_Tawde
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You should also try Dragon Ball Super: Game Of Destruction

Rutuja_Tawde
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You should also try Dragon Ball Super: Game Of Destruction

InsertUserNameHere:I will only say that, you use “ LoL “ to much.
AwronZizao
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Harem is a genre, if you don't like Harem, that's fine. Yet it's a genre. If a harem ruins a story, then that means action can ruin an action story. It doesn't make sense, it's an invalid argument. You can hate and like whatever you wish, however, if you don't like harem. Simply read a story that isn't harem. It's a genre. Like Action, Fantasy, Tragedy, Horror. A harem doesn't automatically make a story bad, an author can make a bad harem, however a harem doesn't mean the story is bad. It just means you don't like it. Which, again. Is perfectly fine, just move on and read something else.

StingyGuy
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It is always cringey hearing about a harem story. LIke how do you **** someone you only knew for like 1-2 weeks for no reason

Mastertrix
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okay with this comment i got all clear u are a 7-13yrs kid or a 70-90yrs third age people

StingyGuy:It is always cringey hearing about a harem story. LIke how do you **** someone you only knew for like 1-2 weeks for no reason
StingyGuy
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Well You can try to do that **** in real life and you balls are gone.

Mastertrix:okay with this comment i got all clear u are a 7-13yrs kid or a 70-90yrs third age people
IdHc
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...it's not about real life. Most people who like the genre don't think real life ones aren't possible, that's why we want to read it in a fiction. Just like fantasy stories are not real. Obviously we can't form qi or go super saiyan, but we like to read stories about them. Just like that other dude said, it's a genre(I guess you could say a sub-genre of romance). You either like it or you hate it, so don't bother reading it if you don't like it. That's why tags are important also. If someone still complains when there's already tags, that's their own fault and their complaints are useless wastes of space.

StingyGuy:Well You can try to do that **** in real life and you balls are gone.
DearCompanion
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☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

Raphael_Lieberte
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gosh your nature really disgusts me bastard a good isekai novel and in the middle of the chapter suddenly the mc gets the harem from there the nature of mc becomes dregs and rubbish, and the storyline starts to be unclear i really hate harems and hentai

CliffkunLolRekt:Also for the rub one out thing That’s also kinda frustrating for you to mention I prefer reading it lol all hentai is **** these days the only good ones were when hentai haven was still going and alive and not afk lol I’m not watching real **** as 99 percent of girls on those websites have roast beef pussy or purple pussy or a baluga whale and I don’t find eather of those attractive With reading ero stuff one can use there brain wich they have trained to imagin stuff like anything To imagin hentai ect and there are not many good **** book websites fanfic wise I have looked and they are hard af to find and if you do they are fucking confusing to use and there is a huge chance you won’t be able to find a non youi book much less the tag you wanted so to be fair I can understand the second part lol So pls try to understand that side too lol even tho I do love harem novels so much I try to understand harem hater sides to lol I can understand everyone has different tastes the only time I don’t really try at all is when I’m delerous at 4 am as i have problems sleeping Honestly a lot of fighting between the harem and harem haters would be resolved if authors would stop bieng indicisive and wrote in the synopsis harem or non harem I’ll give a 0 star and scream In the comments if I suddenly relise what I’ve been reading turned into a yowi ya know same with non harem or harem So let’s say 40 percent of the time the authors are at fault lol
Raphael_Lieberte
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I'm sure in real life you must be community trash or wibu nolep fucks you self-conscious trash

CliffkunLolRekt
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I disagree with your beliefs

Raphael_Lieberte:gosh your nature really disgusts me bastard a good isekai novel and in the middle of the chapter suddenly the mc gets the harem from there the nature of mc becomes dregs and rubbish, and the storyline starts to be unclear i really hate harems and hentai