The Story starts out quite interesting, and manages to hold the tension quite well. The Main Antagonist (Seth i think it was, the Snake from the start) has a reasonable motive in just his want for the Dungeon Core, and his reasonably slow approach, as well as the rescue through his Father who has to make Dealings with the Protagonist, and while tricking him, the Antagonists Father still gives off a feeling of Profesionalism. The only slight point of complaint i have are all the Girls he is surrounded with, while yes, it has a Harem Tag and most of the Girls have a reasonable exlanation for why they are more likely to be a girl for the role they need to fullfill, as in Vannessa having to appease Jason even meant in a sexual way. Though the dungeon sprite and the runic trainer less so. i like the Story overall and would really look forward to more Chapters
Ashra
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