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AncientDragonGod
AncientDragonGodLv55yr
2020-02-20 16:00

Hello there, I just want to let my comment here and ask you to continue the novel, it was nice to have something to read some times but I see that dungeon novels are always like this they always start with a good beginning but always unfinished, and I hope that you can retake and continue this one because I think it has more. 🥱🥱

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