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StarChild098
StarChild098Lv145yr
2019-09-28 14:47

I like the story and the transition of the events of the plot so much. I just hope that you would be able to update the story regularly. I like how the MC being overly cautious after all he was in a different world.

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Novel ini memiliki plot utama yang penuh kekacauan. Semua plot tentang masa depan di masukan semuanya pada tahap awal novel. Bahkan saya merasa kasihan terhadap Mc yang memiliki segudang masalah yang akan dihadapinya dimasa depan. Memang bagus untuk membuat plot yang jelas di awal novel agar memberi gambaran bagaimana novel akan berkembang dimasa depan. Tapi itu bukan hal yang baik untuk membuat plot dimana masa depan Mc akan sangat suram dan menderita di awal novel. Penulis seharusnya membuat beberapa plot utama dan beberapa plot kecil untuk perkembangan Mc secara bertahap dimana Mc menyelesaikan masalah satu demi satu dan Mc memiliki perkembangan mental yang stabil sebelum memberikan beberapa tekanan lagi kepada Mc. Tapi novel ini memulai dengan Mc menderita terhadap plot perusahaan, lalu Mc mendapat tekanan tentang bagaimana lolos dari bahaya orang jahat yang menargetkan venesa, dan sebelum Mc membereskan masalah yang ada, Mc mendapat informasi bahwa area dungeon saat ini adalah zona yang sangat berbahaya, dan beberapa plot lagi yang menambah tekanan Mc. Jujur saja dengan banyaknya tekanan pisikologis yang dimiliki Mc, novel ini lebih cocok dengan latar belakan apocalypse dimana Mc dikelilingi bahaya dari segala arah dan masa depan yang suram. Novel memiliki judul "harvest dungeon " yang seharusnya memiliki gambaran bahwa isi novel adalah bagaimana Mc menumbuhkan dungeon dengan fokus pada pertanian sebagai sumber daya. Jadi melihat bagaimana plot awal diatur dengan banyaknya tekanan pada Mc, saya merasa bahwa novel ini tidak berbeda dengan beberapa tuan muda dengan bakat kultivasi sampah, dan pertunangan dengan wanita cantik dibatalkan, ditambah lagi bahwa keluarga atau klannya menekannya dengan sangat keras. Ahirnya Mc mencari kekuatan demi balas dendam dan mulai menampar wajah para tuan muda sombong yang menghalangi jalannya. Walaupun ada perbedaan sedikit disana sini, tapi inti plot dari novel ini sangat mirip dengan novel xianxia maupun wuxia lainnya. Dan bahkan penulis tidak memberi Mc beberapa gold finger untuk membantunya. Novel dengan tingkat kesilitan neraka.

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