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redvelvetswirly
redvelvetswirlyLv114yr
2020-04-27 07:07

Wonderful Story! The development of the story is slow, but nicely paced with regular (daily) updates. The chapters are on the shorter side. There are many well-rounded characters introduced besides the MC and ML (as well as possible hints of romance between the other characters). The main characters themselves are likable with an intelligent, savvy, and narcissistic MC; ML is the typical silent, gentle, facial-paralysis type. And while it is a modern story, the gaming aspect adds a nice fantasy element to the novel for variety. Both the modern and gaming themes are enjoyable to read and provide a break from each other, though it does seem to be focused slightly more on the game portion for now (around a hundred chapters in) creating a nice setting for the world. The author also includes tones of mystery through gaming (and I'm sure they will only continue to add more). Haven't read Tyramisu's other book yet, but I highly recommend reading this for those who aren't sure as it is easy to follow and lighthearted, great for a casual read. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story writes out!

The Return of the God Level Assassin [BL]

Tyramisu
4.8
1218 Chs

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Tyramisu
TyramisuAuthor

Hi! I don't know if you've already seen it but I chose your review for the best review event. 😊 I'm still not sure about the prize. Let's just wait for Webnovel's announcement. 😊 Thanks again for participating. 🖒

4yr
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redvelvetswirly
redvelvetswirlyLv11

Thank you, I enjoy your story so it means a lot! 🥰

Tyramisu:Hi! I don't know if you've already seen it but I chose your review for the best review event. 😊 I'm still not sure about the prize. Let's just wait for Webnovel's announcement. 😊 Thanks again for participating. 🖒
4yr
PrideIsEternal
PrideIsEternalLv1

I need help, the author of "becoming a monster" Valtura is trying to spread a disgusting homophobic agenda and using blatant alt accounts to attack readers and he thinks saying "boyfriend" is the ultimate insult, it's absolutely disgusting and I refuse to let this stand

2yr
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Tyramisu
TyramisuAuthor

Since we're 10 chapters in, I'll be completely shameless and give myself a 5🌟. 😅 I've always wanted to write BL but never really had the opportunity or the time to do so. I'm a fujoshi thru and thru. If I've been born a guy, I would definitely be gay. LOL. 😂 That's why I'm really happy that I could finally write this. 😊 I've always loved a beautiful shou/uke. That's why I made Yan Yan super pretty. ML hasn't appeared yet. But as i've mentioned on the synopsis, he's a big cinnamon roll. And I really hope that you would love him. 😊 Lastly, I wanted to thank everyone who gave this book a chance and added it to their libraries. I hope you'll continue to enjoy reading it. Arigatou gozaimasu!~

5yr

Karmelit_Shipley
Karmelit_ShipleyLv5

Fufufu(〃艸〃) just found this story after long time not reading here(´～｀ヾ)[with laziness still around] (´･ω･`)━( ´･ω･)━( 　´･ω)━( 　　)━( 　　)━(ω･´　)━(･ω･´)━(｀･ω･´) Shamelessly put 5 star(〃艸〃) while waiting (´～`)

5yr
galactic
galacticLv4

This story is so good that I wish the author to update more chapters good luck from meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........

5yr
Jeannie95
Jeannie95Lv12

I love tyramisu's stories. I dying to read what happens next. They always surprise me and are able to keep my interest at all times. There's only 16 chapter out now but they have manage to capture my attention and i've read them twice now. I'll probably start to read it again later today cause it's Just so interesting and I love This story

5yr
Car_Silva
Car_SilvaLv13

You know a story is good when you just started reading that day and are at the last available chapter wondering how you finished so fast and what is the release schedule.

5yr
VirtualHug
VirtualHugLv4

This book is flat out amazing! I love how it keeps your attention and makes you NEED to know what will happen next. I'm not sure if the main focus of the book will be inside the game or IRL but either way I could see this turning into a book I would read many times. Thank you author and I can't wait to see what happens next 💜

5yr
galactic
galacticLv4

I like how the story goes so far. I also hope that the update can be a lot faster...................................\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

5yr
blanketskies
blanketskiesLv2

This is my first BL novel I read on webnovel hehe. So I will not add in any spoilers as there are just 10 chapters for now. The story is easy to follow and there are plenty of dialogue and interaction between characters. It is simple, yet intriguing to follow. The side characters (especially family) are very doting and lovable and it makes the reader go "aww". Cant wait for more updates and I will update the review again once the author completes the story :) #Shotas4life

5yr
explochi
explochiLv2

Omg I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this novel. The characters are so cute and funny. I especially love the MC. He’s just so cute but also very badass. And also Luo Jin (the very tsundere younger brother😂😂). The family interactions with the MC are SO heartwarming and lovely and even though the ML has only met with the MC for a few short scenes so far, their chemistry is already so explosive and really makes you squeal in excitement!!😍😍😍

5yr
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