Review Detail of kim_the_dreamer in It's Payback Time : dont mess with me

Hmmm, I think the story has a potential...but.... 1. The grammatical errors irks me. 2. The plot is conventional and dragging 3. There are situations which doesn't make sense to me or are explained half heartedly. 4. Some side characters just pops up without proper introduction. They're just suddenly there without interweaving them properly in the plot. No offense though, I am looking forward to see an improved novel from the author. Cheering for you, and hope you'll take this review as a means to grow 😊