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XenonNoble
XenonNobleLv135yr
2019-05-09 08:59

To be honest I’m disappointed. For someone who wanted to be Grievous, he’s acting too nice. He’s too suspicious!!! Dooku would obviously know something’s wrong because Grievous isn’t angry or hateful. He was hateful before the implant was even used (it just kept him constantly angry). I can already tell that unless the MC changes, he’s going to be a beta male, a pushover, and just stupid. He’s already being pushed around by the system, which is a major annoyance (most of my disliked stories are ones with a sadistic, sassy, rude, etc. systems. One last thing. MC is stupid! Of course Dooku and Sidious would be able to find out he’s force sensitive. Apparently he DIDN’T think of that BEFORE being summoned by Dooku. Unless the MC starts being more like the OG Grievous or at least acting like him, then I’m going to drop this. Sorry if I come off as a hater, it’s just really annoying to me.

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I know that a review from one person will probably not get you to continue writting the book after a year of not writing it, but still, from a friendly reader and huge fan if Star Wars, i hope you find it in your heart to continue. And remember, do or do not, there is no try.

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