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LoweCypher
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2020-05-07 21:12

(1) Too much crossover in one world, too much contradiction between each background setting mashed together from fantasy-realism and Modern-futuristic aspects enough to destroy the world before MC could be even born. (2) Development of character is expected to be the bull**** OP toddler style, where author is literally killing MC with only beyond borderline anime logic plot armor to show how it is possible how a 2 yr old child be as powerful as a regular powehouse. (atleast low to mid rank devil in dxd terms) (3) Longevity of this novel would be most reliant on trying to be funny which is less likely and more on fanservice harem lemon jig. Overall: Low grade, something only those who wants fanservice (whether it be about unreasonably boring OP stuff or Harem kinks) would appreciate.

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DevinDevin
DevinDevinLv5

These get worse and worse as time goes on

mow
mowLv4

Honestly the reason i dropped, way too many characters from different anime going on.

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10

Even more so when all sexual content in it so far is also when people are asleep (Plays with a sleeping Yoruichi's boobs when he's six years old, and his first sexual experience is from one of his harem, a blowjob from a boy in a dress while another one watches, whom are part of his trap harem) It is also contradictory how he builds a harem of girls and boys that dresses like girls but refers to the boys as she/her/girl but a girl that dresses and acts as a boy is still referred to as she/her/girl.

DevinDevin:These get worse and worse as time goes on
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