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chaosinacupLv45yr
2019-08-18 04:46

Though it is still early days (chapter 28) this story is already showing incredible potential. Already I am engrossed in the plot, as the author deftly avoids alot of the pitfalls many novels struggle with at the start, and the novel seems to be on track to keep me that way for a while yet. One of the only worries I have is that the systemish AI thing will take over too much of the time so the main character won't rely on their own strength (though this does not seem like it will be the case, as the AI is so far mostly just a information cache). The only other slight concern might be the MC's undecided sexulality (but that is up to personal taste). All things considered it is so far a great read that I highly recommend.

The Treasure She Never Asked For

PinkCotton
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PinkCotton
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Hi guys, shameless author here... hehehe... Well, I started writing this novel cause I kinda always wanted to write transmigration novels, but the more popular ones are historical or eastern fantasy... If I wrote a historical one based on my culture the audience would be very... um... niche... I hope you can give this a try since it is a woman to man transmigration... heh... I feel like I can see your expression right now... hehe... Please don't hesitate to leave a review <3

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Hyowha
HyowhaLv5

Thought it was gonna be a romance novel first—boy was I surprised! The novel is a lot more interesting than those typical cliche CEO handsome male leads we have on here. In fact, the lead may very well be that handsome male lead. The characters are interesting, and I always like me a good transmigration novel. The interesting thing here is that it's not the usual present to past but future to present. I personally know how excruciatingly hard it can be to write about gender bender stuff, (sexual preference, LGBT, how will the person act, what should be elaborated on, writing from two gender perspectives etc.) but so far, the author has balanced it well. I'm excited to see where this will go.

5yr
roselovedibble
roselovedibbleLv3

Although it is to early for a review I'm going to leave one. This book is really engrossing. I love the flow and can not wait for more. Hope this book continue to be updated.

5yr
Looneynoons
LooneynoonsLv10

Author please keep updating. I’m really enjoying this novel. This is a great treasure I found. The background info was subtle and direct. The character build up is great and even the writing quality is good. All in all this novel had great potential. Looking forward to future updates. Thank you!!

5yr
HibariKyoya
HibariKyoyaLv4

Although im only at chapter 4 of this book, I can see that this is a good book with a good writing quality, idea and plot. I look forward to reading what will happen next. Author-san good luck 😇

5yr
Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv12

Seeing these type of novels where it goes into the future 300 years makes me feel older than I really am a great novel hope it keeps coming

5yr
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7

I started to read. I did not like the first two chapters and I decided to limit myself to this. And write your obligatory review. However, I decided to read a little more ... and in a surprising way, I began to like the short story. The interesting story went. This work is worthy of inclusion in my library and one stone for promotion. I will continue to read this short story. Respect to the author and a wish from me as a reader, more updates. I liked it, great! If the two chapters were not too long ...

5yr
stella2138
stella2138Lv5

man your cover's really good. can i adopt that guy as my big bro? i like the synopsis too. though i've not read through yet this princess thinks greatly of it. keep up did the good work.

5yr
Alisha10onten
Alisha10ontenLv14

Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

5yr
HibariKyoya
HibariKyoyaLv4

The story is getting better and better as time goes by when I read it... Though I still see that some parts of the story which I think is a bit too rushed but still, its good. Author-san good luck with lots of love!!! ヾ(≧▽≦*)o (σ≧▽≦)σ

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