Review Detail of Master_Of_Coins in Highschool

This Book Is Good. And I see you are a rookie at writing. Here are a few tips; (1)DO NOT ever write about yourself, because if you do you will add in some stuff about yourself that may take the whole story somewhere else. (2) Its ok to have sarcasm in your story but no offense or anything but you are not a sarcastic person. Like my kid says its CRINGY. (3) You should have a Prologue to let people know what the book is about because also it has been to me, Most people look at the prologue and they Decide if the book will be good and if they want to keep on reading it or not. Well that is all the stuff I want to tell you. Cant let you be better than me :)