Review Detail of UnKnownEntity001 in The Holy Chronicles of Baator

This story is pretty average all together. Was fun in the beginning but it stated becoming a chore to read. There is like 20 different power systems and the author is constantly moving between them and mixing them. It’s very confusing. Around chaoter 350 or so the devils randomly become Muslims?? Like why author? Made no sense at all. Tons of grammatical errors, use grammarly or something author. I think the biggest issue is the author just keeps adding more and more power systems to the story, it become ridiculous. It was fun to read for awhile but like I said, it became more of a chore later on. Best of luck though author.