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Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv142yrKabuk5

Has a lot of potential, but between the instability of updates and the glacial pace of character development, I doubt we will see anything interesting at all in the "Journal type chapters" until chapter 150 or so. The character is supposed to be a self insert from some kind of warhammer 40k world mixed with stellaris or something like that? He'll probably be responsible for bringing the chaos gods in chapter 400 or so after Yahweh's death.

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The Holy Chronicles of Baator

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Trafford
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For first... updates are stable, one chapter every two days... No Stellaris, and around chapter 270 I plan to move onto Astral Boundary already But yeah, I plan to slowly develop the story and not rush it. If possible, I want to write around 800 chapters at a minimum before ending the story if possible.

Kabuk5
Kabuk5Lv14Kabuk5

So, I kept reading, and sadly it became a 4x novel that emphasizes resource gathering instead of people/kingdom/sect development. Basically a generic wuxia story