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oldthrall
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Honestly author has a great and novel idea to use Zeoticus as the target for transmigration but the problem is so far the novel has been leaning heavily to Kingdom Building rather than gathering a harem of “hot milfs” and “Romance” Or any “self insert” whatever that means as suggested in the synopsis. You would expect our MC to see romantic development before side characters do but nope out of the blue a side char nabs a wife/mate before our MC has even gone to 2nd base. Some have complained that woman should be reserved for MC but that isnt the issue...the issue is they got developments before our MC did and it is frustrating to read about. It would have been a better choice to give the MC progress with atleast his first harem member or a second one before bothering to show anything about a side characters’ romance... If author wanted to write a story with multiple main characters, great but dont label it as “self insert” “harem” “romance” when these things dont happen to the MC in order of priority. Finally there is a strange obsession with cultivation themes even though such things were barely mentioned in DxD canon. Tbh its a very unique approach but author is in denial that he reads cultivation novels...like what? Then why that focus? Its alright for killing time I guess

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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

+1

StormBreaker
StormBreakerLv2StormBreaker

+1

Walter_Lebron
Walter_LebronLv13Walter_Lebron

Supongo que el hecho que el harem se desarrolle de manera tan lenta es frustrante pero si lo ves des de otro punto de vista no le da esto una mayor profundidad a los personajes asi como se piensa de manera objetiva que otros personajes pueden desarrollarse con el mc ( estamos deacuardo que estamos artos de ver como un mc tiene intereses amorosos inutiles para cualquier cosa que no sea tener sexo )

Sloth_Incarnate
Sloth_IncarnateLv15Sloth_Incarnate

This is the most incel thing I’ve ever read. 😂

Kaisen1
Kaisen1Lv4Kaisen1

incel review lol. go watch pxrn

DaarkX
DaarkXLv4DaarkX

🤓

average_ff_enjoyr
average_ff_enjoyrLv3average_ff_enjoyr

incel review lol. go watch pxrn

Kaisen1:incel review lol. go watch pxrn