Review Detail of trekt in Septem

Please fix your grammar before uploading more, ALMOST unreadable at this state. 2/5 The story is ok, typical wish fulfillment.2/5 OP character and edgy personality, nothing unique though. 2/5 World background is ok. 3/5 I can give you a full fletched critic but it's 11PM and I have lectures tommorow. I hope you can understand. Also keep writing you cannot improve without practice